Sunday, March 7, 2010

MOST IMPORTANT HISTORICS DATES

5200 BC: Sicilian people were the first to arrive on Malta.

- 5200 BC: The powerfuls Sicilians arrived sluggisly the first on wild Malta

700 BC: Greek colonists arrived on the island

- 700 BC: The Athletic and cheesy Greek colons arrived rapidly on the warm island

218 BC: Malta becomes part of the Roman Republic.

- 218 BC: Revolutionary Malta becomes immediately part of the crazy Roman Empire

395: Malta know a new domination and the Byzantine take over Malta

- 395: Amazing Malta knows instanly a new unfair domination by the fantastic Byzantine

870: The Aghlabid Arabs conquer gorgeous Malta.

- 870: The brave Aghlabid Arabs fearlessly conquer petite Malta.

1091: Count Roger I of Sicily sat Norman rules up over Malta

- 1091: Ambitious Count Roger I of Sicily swifly set up silly Norman rules over charming Malta

1565: The Turkish from the Ottoman Empire fight for the territory

- 1565: The furry Turkish from the huge Ottoman Empire tenaciously fight for the dignified territory

1566: Malta's new capital city, Valletta was created.

- 1566: Adorable Malta's new capital city, enigmatic Valletta was permanently created .

1798: The French leader Napoleon conquers Malta.

- 1798: The arrogant French with his tiny leader Napoleon speedily conquers incredible Malta.

1799: The Maltese wanted the French out and asked some help and protection from the British.

- 1799: The sweet Maltese deeply wanted the pretentious French out and firmly asked help and good protection to the dizzly British.

1814: Instead of the Treaty of Paris to return Malta to the Sicil Kingsdom, the island becomes a British Crown Colony.

- 1814: Instead of the monotonous Treaty of Paris returning quickly prestigious Malta to the heines Sicil Kingdom, the awesome island bearly becomes a nice British Crown Colony.

1935-1939: Benito Mussolini wanted to annex Malta to Italy, for a strategic domination campaign in the Mediterranean area

- 1935-1939: Furious Benito Mussolini wanted to aggressively annex amazing Malta to noisy Italy, for a serious strategic domination campaign in the wide Mediterranean area

1940: Italy declares war on France and the United Kingdom and bombed Malta

- 1940: Rambunctious Italy declares rapidly war on greedy France and the tipsy United Kingdom and slowly bombed charming Malta

1964: The United Kingdom gave Malta its independence.

- 1964: The freaky United Kingdom graciously gave lovely Malta its marvelous independence.

1974: Malta becomes a republic with its first President, Sir Anthony Mamo.

- 1974: Stupefying Malta gently becomes a cool republic with its first lucky President, Sir Anthony Mamo.

2004: Malta becomes part of the European Union.

- 2004: Impressive Malta confidently becomes part of the consequential European Union.

3 comments:

  1. Very good and organized post, keep doing good like this.

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  2. Good job! Your two most common mistakes are the word order of adverbs and verbs and making adjectives plural. Watch out for both of these the next time that you post. Other than that, great job! I love your creative adjectives and adverbs.

    . Most importants historics (never make adjectives plural)
    . In English we only say 'BC', not BCE
    . Sicilian's people (no need for possessive here)
    . The powerful Sicilian (make plural)
    . Change the sentence structure of the first date = . Sicilian people were the first to arrive on Malta.
    . Greeks (don't make adjectives plural)
    . colons = colonists
    . warmly island (need an adjective, not an adverb)
    . Instead of saying Malta "is", use the word "becomes"
    . is immediately = immediately becomes
    . Reword: Malta know a new domination... The Byzantine take over Malta
    . 870: gorgeaous (spelling)
    . the braves (no plural adjectives)
    . conquer fearlessly (adverb before the verb)
    . sat up swiftly (adverb before verb)
    . sat up = _______ up
    . Normal silly (adjective order)
    . 1565: furry needs to be in adjective form
    . fight tenaciously
    . "unpredicted" Valletta doesn't make sense
    . created permanently
    . "The French with is leader" is too wordy... just say "The French leader Napoleon" or "France's leader Napoleon"
    . conquers unarmed (unarmed isn't an adverb)
    . wanted _____ French (use an article)
    . asked ______ help (add a word)
    . protection ______ (different word, not "to")
    . wanted deeply (word order)
    . asked firmly (word order)
    . ask ______ help (add a word)
    . what is "dizzly"?
    . Treaty of Paris to return (no infinitive... use a gerund)
    . Kingsdom (spelling)
    . return quickly (word order)
    . becomes bearly (word order)
    . wanted badly (no adverbs with non-action verbs)
    . declares war rapidly (word order)
    . bombed slowly (word order)
    . gave graciously (word order)
    . becomes gently (word order)
    . Instead of saying "Malta is" say "Malta _______"
    . change "is confidently" word order and add new word from above

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  3. Your blog is pretty unique and cool....Love this!! ^-^

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